25 April, 2006

"Everything has its beauty, but not everyone sees it”

The beauty of their face, lies in their heart..
So clear the inner phase of their heart is ..
so shinny and glowing are the elements with which they are composed..
so fine are their thoughts and precptions..
so noble and motivating is their character..
so stricking is their plead..
Still it all demands something...
Yes it all demands something ..
an eye of a loving one !

Following is my poetic attempt..which has tried to reveal the above fact..

Such beauty and such charm !
Oh wht a serene calm !
Though lingering in their arm..
Still must is visions balm!

Isint it true guys..
The true beauty ,character,personality ..it all is embosed when there is someone to imprint ...when there is someone to adore..when there is someone who has a vision of visualizing the beauty of beautifuls...!

Hence this quote justifies it all..

"Beauty lies in the eye of beholder"


Blogger Clobber the Limits said...

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3:01 PM  
Blogger Clobber the Limits said...

Even this is a new style and i guess this is much appeasing....the one that may envy you ...if you dont have that 'loving one'.(like me....oops)
But seriously this may make people realise people that their 'loving ones' may have endowed them with such a comfort, with whom they would have ensconced sometimes....really a good one!! loved that...keep the work going
Ravi Dhanwani

3:04 PM  
Blogger Virus© said...

wow... outstanding.
Nice poem.
N dude, I completely agree with your views..

4:29 PM  
Blogger Dawn....सेहर said...

Oh so finally....u r getting it isnt it ??? good to see that someone is learning ;)

6:01 AM  
Blogger direkishore said...

that's a good post and a good attempt at poetry as well!


11:58 PM  

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