21 February, 2006

“The moment of change is the only poem”




Though am not very relaxed today..as am tensed for how and when to start preparing for exams Lol...but even then..my day was not so bad :)..'Smiling and and having fun'...tht all was still a part! Moreover..I regained my orginal composed state..with all my thoughts jotted down in the form of a poem..Yes guys i wrote a poem today LoL :D..and tht too during a class lecture Hahaha ;))
Hope this poem makes some sense ;) and the title of the poem..I leave it on you guys to decide :)

When life looks all so dim,
faded and unpleasent,
when passion comes to end,
and sorrows on the swing,
dont let your life dispatch
dont let the loss begin !
Think of the ones who love,
you to the core of heart,
who's life is simply you,
who's dreams are through ur path!
dont let those dreams just end
dont let those hopes depart!
Bring up the dead passion,
tht heart of a young man,
which all is so certain,
though all you are in pain,
but live a life my friend,
yes live a life again !!!

11 Comments:

Blogger :: The Protector :: said...

hey tats good lines....

Cheers!
:)

5:25 PM  
Blogger Gumnaaaam said...

Hii..
Thnxz a lot vishnu..
btw ..i like the name..vishnu :)
sounds cute..

So wht title have u decided ?! ;p

1:47 AM  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

hey dear u just had some exams na...
kitne exams degi ;-) lolzz
all the very best :-)

that poem is very beautiful :-)
luvd it :-)

Cheers

9:52 AM  
Blogger :: The Protector :: said...

glad that you like my name :)

Live Life - does it sounds gud.... dono.. btw, all d best for your exams...

Cheers!
:)

10:27 AM  
Blogger Gumnaaaam said...

@puneet: Ye had xams just now..but tht were mmidterms..N now am worried for finals..Lolz ;) But there are still few months left in finals...so u guys must start praying frm now...while I ..working ;) :D

Thnks so much :)
cheers !

@vishnu : "live life" Well this sounds great..! Narrates the entire story of the poem..

Thnks :)

cheers !

12:10 PM  
Blogger Ash said...

spontaneous .......
and i empathize .....

Ash

1:01 PM  
Blogger Dawn....सेहर said...

sometimes a poet doesnt need anything to instigate...as his/her mind is always wandering...:) & then the thoughts come in to jott ;)...a poet is never tied-up to a situation or place ...
Its awesome...poem...where u r saying that...'Life is beautiful - just embrace it with love' ;) (this was my quote in Bahas)...
cheers
& good luck to for ur exams ..my duas are always there for u my dear :)

hugggzzzzz & lots of love

11:31 PM  
Blogger Łóòň Ġãĺ said...

Awwwwwwww ... that was so inspiring .... so u a poet too .... really well written!!!!

Title could be 'Live a life!'

LOL i know i wasnt tht innovative ... but it suits ... ;p

rock on!

11:52 PM  
Blogger Phoenix Rises said...

Taking a line from your poem only, how's the title "Live a Life Again "? At last a poem that my puny mind could follow!! LOL!! :))

1:42 AM  
Blogger done said...

Hello:)
Very good poem, and good advice to it also:) I hope you did well on your exams:) Take care, and Thanks for your comment on my post:) Elisa:)

6:06 PM  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

lolz dear
ye ye praying for u...
and u start ur studies ;-)

prayer will only help if u have studied ;-)
strange na... bt thats how it happens :-)
hehehe

4:52 PM  

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