Poetry is the impish attempt to paint the color of the wind !
Poetry is an art of apprehending and interpreting ideas by the faculty of imagination, the art of idealizing in thought and in expression. It is the depth of one's self which poetry represents and to continue with this art it is necessary to be habitual.
0kay let me come straight to the point...after a long gap i recovered my blog..
so i thought to recover my skills aswell...and as a result i merged some words until they were named as a Creation..:)
Meray hathoun ki lakeeroun mai jo gehrayi thi ..
meray mathay pe jo lali say lakeer ayi thi ...
meray gaaloun pe jo muskaan ki angrayi thi...
ye haqeeqat tha k afsana-e-rusvaii thi...
meri janib jo kaba ayi thi lehrayi thi..
sansoun mai gholay howay khushbo-e-gul layi thi..
anhk ki chot pe sapnaoun ki jo parchayii thi..
ye haqeeqat tha k afsana-e-rusvaii thi...
Phir naye rang mai us shaks ki yaad ayi thi...
us ki ankhoun mai bhi milnay ki kasaak chayi thi...
dhoondti uski nazar pass meray ayii thii.....
ye haqeeqat tha k afsana-e-rusvaii thi...
Hum mai ek pal ki bhi doori na kabhi ayii thi...
jenay marnay ki kasam khayi thi ...nibahayi thi..
haye kya rabt tha ! kya khoob shanasayi thi ....
ye haqeeqat tha k afsana-e-rusvaii thi...
posted by Zyenab at 12:39 AM
6 Comments:
WOW..welcome to the world of bloggers heheheheeh (darawani hasi )
well amazing poetry...I must say...but seems like...for all the happiness that you get or in the poetry one predicts...there is lack of confidence...thats why there is a unanswered question...
[b]ye haqeeqat tha k afsana-e-rusvaii thi...[/b]
merr dost...mere humdum...khud per bharosa rakho aur phir iss nazm ko parho...shayad aftaab ki roshni nazar aaye aapko :)
daad hee daad kabool farmayein ek acchi shuruwat ke liye ;)
cheers!
ohh btw..bahut hee khoobsurat phool pesh kiya hai...MashaAllah!!!
Hi…
Thanks so much for dropping by my blog…
i merged some words until they were named as a Creation..:)
awesome statemnet… gosh I’ve read ur blog earlier also… its just too good
ye haqeeqat tha k afsana-e-rusvaii thi...
bahut hi khubsurat nazm hain… truly one of the best I’ve read…
Just keep writing
Cheers
Again nice flow which is one of ur trademark!
But after all that wonderful sweetly woven imagination in each para u r still questioning
ye haqeeqat tha k afsana-e-rusvaii thi...
pehli teen lines padh ke mere man mein to ye baat aayi
ye mera sapna tha ya haqeeqat mujhse takrayi thi!
keep flowing :)
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brilliant!
god! that is soo good! coming so naturally, each piece falling in to place, loved your flow
ye haqeeqat tha k afsaana-e-rusvaii thi...
brilliant! i dint know what i was missing on, till i came here today...;)
saw some more of your stuff too, really enjoyed your style.
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